Deep Brown Eyes
Going to a place where I’ve never been,
with a speed which gives me a thrill.
Looking out of the window remembering her smile and sparkling eyes.
Her deep brown eyes have become everything to my sight.
It sparkles when she looks at me,
it gets excited when she listen to my stories.
I want to travel the world,
but when I look in those deep brown eyes,
I see my whole world at one place.
Duane at 12:29 am, September 7, 2018 -
I wonder whether those deep brown eyes are literal or symbolical. Whatever they are I can say that the words that made up the poem were written thoughtfully.
May your other readers feel the thrill of reading your written work as much as I do.
Insane Traveller at 3:57 pm, September 7, 2018 -
Thank you for such lovely comments, Duane.